3 HOUR LATER…..
Ring the bell rings YEAH I get to go to my sister ‘fake birthday’ still i think it's so weird that they FORGOT MY BIRTHDAY that weird haley is picking me up.
Monday, June 25, 2018
100wc #37 Marissa
It was my birthday and it had been raining all morning and mum and dad had forgot my birthday.And my birthday was on a school day so i got ready for school and mum and dad told me they were having a family dinner for my sister because she got in to the poem Finals it is weird my mum and dad FORGOT MY BIRTHDAY.
3 HOUR LATER…..
Ring the bell rings YEAH I get to go to my sister ‘fake birthday’ still i think it's so weird that they FORGOT MY BIRTHDAY that weird haley is picking me up.
3 HOUR LATER…..
Ring the bell rings YEAH I get to go to my sister ‘fake birthday’ still i think it's so weird that they FORGOT MY BIRTHDAY that weird haley is picking me up.
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Hi Marissa
ReplyDeletegreat job on your story I like how you ended it like that was weird hayley is picking me up
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