One morning in new York I was getting ready for work then to get to work I had to drive of the huge bridge in new York it was the biggest bridge I had ever seen it took like 2 mins to drive over the huge bridge then the next day I got ready for work I got in my car I got the bridge and it was covered with sprinkled pink daffodil the whole bridge was fall of daffodils I don't know where they came from but someone must of put them there I don't have a clue.
Thursday, June 7, 2018
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hi laine I like how you put in at the end i don't have a clue
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