Dad still used it anyway and then he said do you want to have a turn and I said ok so then I did and then I got the drone stuck in my hair and it took a long time to get it out of my hair.
The next day I went to go and check my clothes and some of them were the right colour and some of them were blue and they were meant to be purple not blue but they were light blue so then I told Mum and she said "what colour are they meant to be" and I said "Pink."
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