Sunday, September 9, 2018

100WC - Week #1 - Lucy



The Big Hands.

The big hands coming out of the ground are there because in the olden days people in Snovtille town were under attack by a huge giant made of stone. So they wanted him dead. He found out so he got a big whip. And just when he got it they people started attacking him and they buried him underground. They were so happy that they didn't bother to take the whip out of his hand or burry the hands they wanted everyone to see what they did.

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