It was late afternoon when Veronica was wanting to go prom shopping
for a dress. She was going from shop to shop trying to find the perfect colour
until… she found the perfect long flat dress.
"But what colour should it be?" she asked.
“I don't know maybe the blue” Mum replied.
“Yeah I really like the blue” But they had a $150 budget and the dress was $200.
“Mum please can I get it i will the extra $50.”
“No”
“Yes”
“No”
“Yes”
“Fine”
“Yay thank you thank you”
So they got the dress and the prom was awesome.
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