¨Red¨ said someone
¨NO blue¨
¨No Orange is better!!¨
¨Hey hey quiet down everyone¨ said Mum ¨Why are you all yelling it is my project not yours and you don't even know what is it yet!!¨
¨Oh yeah we DON´T do we¨ said the kid that didn't yell out a colour.
¨Oh, well can you tell us then please Mummy¨ said the youngest kid.
¨No. Not yet.¨
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