“I want a T-shirt for my
birthday, Blue!"my brother shouts at me.
“Okay, I’ll get you a blue shirt,”I sigh.
“Yay!”My brother shouts.
Though I had a plan. I wasn’t actually going to get him a blue shirt.So I got him a turquoise shirt. I laugh mischevely. As I hand him the present he opens it in delight, then suddenly realises that it is the wrong colour.
“But it is the wrong colour!”he shouts at me.
‘Yes I knew that all along” I laugh.
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