¨Oh no Jack there is going to be some fighting to do ¨ explained Bella.
¨Yep I can see what you are talking about Bella ¨ Jack said in fear.
¨It looks like there´ve been here a couple of years¨ Bella said trying to hold it in.
¨I don't think they have been here for a couple of years I think they have been here for 100 years¨ Jack said, getting worried. "Okay, we're about to land so get ready to fight."
"Um okay is it time yet because I am not ready fly" Bella says pushing me out of the plane.
"Um okay is it time yet because I am not ready fly" Bella says pushing me out of the plane.
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