¨Yeah what are we colouring?¨Hanna asked.
¨A dinosaur with spots and dots¨I explained.
¨Well then let's get started¨ Hanna shouted. I was going well when Hannah used red instead of blue.
¨No no b b but its the wrong colour!¨ I cried
¨Oh nuts¨ she said.
¨Well how about I get another copy and you get and you keep this copy¨ I explained.
¨That is so unfair no I'm not gonna keep this old one I want a new one too¨ she screamed.
¨Well you have already ruined this one¨ I screamed
¨MUM!¨ Hanna shouted.
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