‘’I’m going now honey’’
‘’Alright remember to get me that pink floral top that I want.’’
‘’Yup’’ yelled Mum as she flies through the door.
It takes her about half an hour to come back.
{half an hour later}
Yay she is finally back, I see what she has got. ‘’What!!!!!!!’’ I yell ‘’why is this purple I wanted floral pink’’
‘’Well’’ says mum in a soft voice ‘’there were no floral pink t shirts so I got a purple one for you’’
‘’Mum it’s the but it is the wrong colour!'’
Hello, Abbie. I liked your piece because the pink floral top was a fantastic topic, but you need to work on your spelling, checking your work, and fixing any errors of word putting.
ReplyDeleteYour friend, Aden