“What is this?” said Kayla, as she walks deeper into the plants.
“It looks like some deadly virus,” replied Mason, “we have to take it back to earth to do some testing then, we'll have to start quickly before it spreads.”
“Indeed we do,“whispered Kayla. For a moment they both look at the dried up earth in confusion. “Run,” Kayla screamed as everything before them turns brown like it is infected too. They hurry back to the spaceship like they had never ran before once they got back to the ship they sat down to talk when they realised that they were turning brown too. They were infected!
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