Far far away a planet sits in the universe there is no living things other than plants and trees. There’s a long paddock filled with roots that are about two feet tall it is mostly all wetlands there is only one little lake.
A small
group from a high school In New York were getting ready to explore this lost planet.
They arrived in a small rocket there were about twelve kids in the group. They had to pair up in two’s. There was one pair that weren’t that
interested in the trip and they thought it would be boring but once they walked
around the corner it was a whole ‘nother world don don
dooooooooooooooooon ……………..
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