“Ready, set, charge”I yelled the battle had begun.
There was a space battle, in a rocket ship, out in the middle of space.Two robots were having a battle, to win you had to get your opponent’s sword out of their hand.Robot 1 was winning right now while robot 2 was having a hard time.Suddenly robot 2 fell, his giant guitar fell to the earth and the space ship we were on jerked downwards.We all watched as the giant guitar smashed into concrete and began sinking down into the pavement, robot 2 had won.
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