Running
excitedly to the scooter shop
knowing that my own DIY scooter was waiting to get ridden was the best feeling
in the world. I had ordered it last week and surprised that it was here already
here, I even had to miss an hour of work just to get here, (yes i am an adult).
I knew I was late because I had to run out of a meeting this better
be quick I said to myself. as as I walked into the shop I could just see a
glimpse of my scooter it and rose
gold wheels and transparent handles and the base or the
scooter was white!
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