Sunday, May 5, 2019

100wc week# 29 Ruby

Yummy yummy


Brown and yellow
Can we have marshmallows
No Giraffe for dinner


Sounds like a feast
Says Mr Grinner
Raw red meat dripping


From his gums


Salt on top smells yum for my tum
Melted butter splattered on top
Greasy oil  on the raw red meat
Lions tummy knows that was a treat
Little brother shouting raw red meat know fear!
It’s not your meat it’s my treat.

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMay 14, 2019 at 1:57 PM

    this is cool but it did make me shudder. burrrrr.

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