We were playing with a anchor and it fell through the earth and it landed in china. And they throw it back and we were playing throws for like 12 hours.It was fun the dinner came up and i cept the ball so they could not play anymore so then they came up and took it away from me. So i jumped down into the ground and I was fighting them so they would give it back but they did not so I had to beat them up big time
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