Sunday, May 5, 2019
100WC - Week #29 - Genevieve
You’re at the zoo with your parents and brother, you see giraffes but one giraffe looks very special, it has yellow spots on brown skin. You are allowed to touch some animals so you go to touch the giraffe “Ew!΅ you scream “It’s so GREASY” you look back at your parents and they have melted into mush! Then more people come alone and force you to eat the mush but once it’s in your mouth it turns to pure salt. Then, you wake up. You walk into the kitchen, horrified, you see your Dad flip a pancake while saying, “Hey kiddo! We are going to the zoo today”
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