Wednesday, May 15, 2019

100WC - Genevieve - Week #30

There’s a boy named Gerald he is a normal boy, he has a nice life. One morning, when Gerald woke up to go to school, he noticed something, “Where’s my school uniform?!” he sprinted, in his pajamas to his little sister’s, Sophie’s, room who was about five, he found her playing dress up with her dolls, using his uniform! “Mom... “ he yelled defeated, “Ring the school and tell them my uniform got messed up by Sophie…” so he went to school, in normal clothes. He was late to class so he sat down next to his friend his day was terrible but his teacher farted and for no reason Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing.
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  1. UnknownMay 15, 2019 at 3:20 PM

    Abigail McKinney rm23 Karori Normal School
    I really liked your story because it was funny how the teacher farted.

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