One night my friend Gerald came over for a
sleepover we watched a movie till 9 o'clock.
After that we
stayed up telling riddles here’s one for you there is a beer in a room with you
also a hyena and a jaguar
What do you
do!! You drink the beer you shoot the hyena and you drive away in the jaguar.
And then he
told me a joke that i already know! Why did the cow cross the road to get to
the mooovies.
It didn’t
make me laugh but Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing.
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