When I was in Peru we went up to Machu Picchu and we went over the mountain and I saw all of these huts. They were like they were burnt it was not a good sight. The guy said "Let’s get back on the bus." We went straight away so I grabbed Mum and ran back to the bus. Then the bus driver drove off the fastest then he has done the whole trip. We went back to our hotel and I went to sleep and then I was being for most of the trip. After that it was not good.
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