One day I was doing my morning walk, I walked all around town. And I went to Gerald's house and I told him a joke, and Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing and he laughed for an hour I freaked out. I thought that he had a sickness.
So I took him to the doctor and the doctor said that he has got laughy itis. The only cure is to tell a bad joke, I could do that easily. But I didn't know any bad jokes so I looked on google and there were lots of bad jokes, so I told him the worst joke ever and he stopped laughing so I was so pleased.
So I took him to the doctor and the doctor said that he has got laughy itis. The only cure is to tell a bad joke, I could do that easily. But I didn't know any bad jokes so I looked on google and there were lots of bad jokes, so I told him the worst joke ever and he stopped laughing so I was so pleased.
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