¨Rose where
are you , you need to get ready for school!¨ Mum shouted ¨your gonna be late!¨
¨Coming mum!¨Rose said excitedly ¨ I can't wait to ride my new mobility scooter to
school i´m gonna look so cool!¨
¨Yes your gonna be the coolest in class¨ Mum shouted from downstairs.
As Rose went down the hill to school she got some weird looks from people
walking their babies and going for a run.When Rose arrived
at school she got bullied so much she started to think she could be transparent
and never be seen again!
¨Why are people bullying me?¨Rose thought
to herself.
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