“Everyone find a pinch of salt and a brown leaf”.The zookeeper said.As we all rushed off to find these things, I was at the zoo doing a challenge with my brother.I searched around “over there, near the giraffe enclosure”I heard a boy exclaim.I ran right to the door that led into the giraffe enclosure it said ‘keep out zookeepers only’ I ignored the sign and barged right into the door, suddenly a giraffe barged into me headfirst, then all of a sudden I was on top of it’s head racing toward the zookeeper, I was so high up that I got a brown leaf and found some salt on a tree I was the first one back with both of the objects.My hands were greasy from the giraffe but I licked happily at my melted ice cream the prize.
Wednesday, May 8, 2019
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i really liked your thing but your quotation marks werent i the right place.
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