Thursday, May 16, 2019
100WC - Week #30 - Abbie
‘’Wake up’’ mum yelled ‘’gerald is coming over today he will be here any minute so get dressed’’ ‘’ok’’ I add someone knocks at the door ‘’i’ll get it’’ i say. ‘’oh hi gerald do you want help me make my breakfast’’ i asked hoping that he would say yes. ‘’shore but you should get dressed first and i will get everything out’’ he say weirdly. ‘’Ok’’ i am so confused anyways i go and get dressed and i come back and he says ‘’can you please open these tomatoes for me.’’ ok but i fee… SPLAT! They go all over me and gerald just couldn’t stop laughing.
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