One lovely morning me and my friend went to the beach we walked down a road close to the beach and in the distant we saw something that looked very small and white.So we kept on walking to it it started to get bigger and bigger as we got closer to it finally we were right in front
Of it it was humongous is it a guitar no it is and anker is it a boat i don’t know so why are you asking me.
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