Charli! wake up! Mum shouted what where are we going I asked, we are going to the zoo
What the zoo yay I replied so we got ready and then went to the zoo I was so excited we got to the zoo and Mum payed then I said to Mum I wanted to go to the giraffes first so we did and when I was walking over I saw this brown greasy giraffe then I saw this lady feeding then melted salt this was a really weird day.
Thursday, May 9, 2019
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When I read your story, Charli, I could feel your excitement about going to the zoo! This is how my boys feel when I tell them we are going to the zoo too. Your story also reminded me of when I fed the giraffe at the zoo. Thank you for stirring memories for me.
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IL, USA