One day a ship came and the tide was very high. It was at night so the captain did not see a thing and he put his anchor down and his ship crashed so the anchor is in the museum. It has been in there for 1000 years and know body knows who was on the boat. So one night someone went to the museum and tried to find out who was on the boat. He found out who was his name was bob so everyone knows who was on that boat.
Thursday, May 23, 2019
100WC #week-31-BRENDAN
One day a ship came and the tide was very high. It was at night so the captain did not see a thing and he put his anchor down and his ship crashed so the anchor is in the museum. It has been in there for 1000 years and know body knows who was on the boat. So one night someone went to the museum and tried to find out who was on the boat. He found out who was his name was bob so everyone knows who was on that boat.
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