Monday, September 3, 2018

Marissa Special Prompt #7

One day I was colouring the sun green but then my Mum said that's not the colour of the sun so I rubbed it out and said "but what colour should it be?"
Then Mum said it should be yellow and then I went to get my yellow pencil but it was not there so I asked mum if she known were it was and then she said "No I do not known where your yellow pencil is."    So asked if we could go get a yellow pencil but Mum said "there are no yellow pencils in the shop."  OH NO.

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  1. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2018 at 3:49 PM

    i like how you made it like you were going back in time

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