¨Come on Maia it will be fun!¨ I yell as I race through the forest that surrounds my house.
¨I´m Coming ̈ My BFF yells clearly not happy to be running out towards the willow on the edge of the forest.
¨wow!!! Were here” I whisper. Right before my eyes is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen. The amazing green leaves were spread like a cloak over the trunk which had a little door in it.
“ Maia come on”
“Kelly stop yelling I’m here already. Wow” she looks up, Then see’s the door.
But I had to see what was inside
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