“ you know what tomorrow is” “it is Friday” ya anything that is special” “oh ya i’m getting a heir cut” “it is my birthday.”“ let’s go to school” “what should i get for her she is going be to 10” “let’s go to school ” i’m going to get you a present OK” “OK bye” “bye.’’ “that is $359.99” “OK thank you” “hi Mum” “ i’m going to see a friend” “OK bye” “bye.” “OK let I need to see what is in that box” “i’m back what were you doing” “but I had to see what was inside the box”.
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