As I rode my red scooter on the concrete I saw something fluffy yes fluffy.I Slowed down it was a bunny it looked like it was dancing so I started dancing too. Then I gently picked it up. It was so cold so I was scootering with a bunny in my arms really fast home and then I got a big container and I put an old newspaper in the bottom then I put the bunny inside and I got some old baby toys. Then the bunny started playing with the toys. I get a barbe blanket and put it around the bunny. Then my mum got home.She said hello i said hey and she came into the lounge and used what was in there bella?.I said it's a bunny. I found it down the road when I went for a scooter ride.
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