I was out walking with my friends at about 3:00 PM but when we were walking down the street to the dairy to get some ice cream i noticed something out of the corner of my eye.
I just kept walking but then it started to occur to me that that what i saw wasn’t just a random hallucination but it was a person, i looked behind us but all i saw was darkness, then i looked back and i saw a door.
Me and my friends started to freak out. But i had to see what was inside...
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