I was sitting on the couch when somebody knocked on the door. I got up to see who it was. I went to open the door and there was a brown box sitting on the step. I didn’t want to open it but I had to see what was inside. So I carried it inside, grabbed the scissors and started to cut through the tape. I was very hungry, so I grabbed an apple from the kitchen. I walked back and there was a little dog sitting on the floor! I picked it up and sat down on the couch with my new pet...
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