I was in a fight at school and then she did this exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists and I did not know what she meant. She said the fight is over then they just still did it. Then a teacher said go to the staff room and you can sit on the set outside. Then we said yes Mrs Horan. Then when we went back to class everybody was looking at us like what were you doing at lunch. Then it was home time and everybody were coming up to me and saying what happened at lunch time
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