I was riding my scooter on the smooth concrete. When i come upon this fluffy, red dancing rooster.
‘Why is there a fluffy red chicken dancing?!’ i think to myself.
“G’day Mate” says the rooster. I scream on the top of my lungs.
‘Wow i can’t believe i just danced’ says the says the rooster
“I CAN'T BELIEVE IT EITHER!!!!!!!” I squeal even louder than last time.
The rooster must have been offended by my comments and ran off. I open my eyes to see that i'm in my bed, not in front of a talking dancing chicken. I calm down. But the i hear
“g’day mate”
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