“Hi im Jacob Yup thats me im a polar bear!”
“Your probably wondering how i got here!”
“It all began when i was with my friends”
“Then a snow blizzard came along!”
“While i was playing i tried to run but then the ice i was on broke!”
“So here i am stranded!”
“Well it is pretty CHILLY though haha”
“And im really cold”
“SooooOO Maybe you could throw me a blanket!”
“Oh wait thats right im stuck”
“But if you see my pretty please give me a blanket!”
“Because its extremely cold even though i have furr!”
“So thank you this is my story of being stranded to death!”
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