Today I was going to the WATER park. I was really EXCITED at first but then it got scary. I was wondering if the water would freeze because of how cold it is today. When I got there it was normal but when I got in the water IT STARTED TO GET FROZEN! I got a dum idea though I fought it would break if I threw a RUBBER band at it but it did not do the trick. I tried STRIPED myself but it did not work. I think i'm stuck. HELP ME PLEASE!! I'M STUCK IN A MINI POOL!
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