“Hay what is that in the distance is that a polar bear”
“hay their the my name is peet I am going to make that poler bear in to a nice mat”.
“You can’t do that he is to cute”
“not in my world little boy now get out of my way”
“no i’m not letting you hurt it he is my pet”
“a poler bear is your pet on a ice berg”
“yes”
“what is it’s name”
“bob”
“bob I like the name now call it”.
“Here bob bob bob”
“Good boy”
“I like it you can keep it”
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