Home alone.
Wide awake in the dead of night,
listening carefully to the sound of the odd car go by.
Then… Bang Crack.
I fling myself up sitting still as a stick,
I gently whisper to myself “ it’s a dream ”.
I get out of bed and stray down the stairs quietly walk down the stairs,
trying to avoid the creaky stair,
I slowly turn the corner and look into the kitchen
I focus my eyes on the to see a if there is an entroder,
Then I feel someone breathing down my neck,
but when I looked behind me GGRRRR.
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