I hear a deep rumble. I looked up and saw a tidal wave of thick white snow tumbling down towards me and then I feel something hit head and I see darkness
When I wake up my vision is blurry. Me on a 2 metre long iceberg in the middle of the ocean.
My head is throbbing intensely so when I see a penguin I think I'm hallucinating because penguins are only in antarctica. Wait, I'm in antarctica!!. Thousands of Kilometres from my home. In the arctic.
I must have been knocked out for days if I got this far.
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