I was walking in my front door with my dog, it was a hot day so I left my door open.
I went into the kitchen and started to unpack my bag.
‘Knock, knock’
Wait… didn’t I leave my door open? If someone knocked then they would have had to come inside!
The kitchen was just in front of the door, so I thought I better see who it was. Wait… It might be the grocery man ‘cause I ordered online this week. but when I looked behind me there was nobody there.
‘Hello… is anybody there?’ says the voice...
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