Beep Beep Beep by the second
The sound of the radar system annoys me
I call the captain “Sir! “What? “When are we going to reach our destination?
“In a few more hours, trust me this will be the greatest discovery of your life”
“Yay im excited”
(A few hours later)
Our submarine detected something of monumental size; it towered over our sub and it was in a cave?
How could something so big fit inside a cave?
It casted a massive shadow over our sub and the automatic lights turned on
We went through the underwater cave and saw it a titanic beast of a shark a goliath
It towered over us
“But I thought the megalodon was the biggest shark”
“This is a megalodon.”
“H..how big is it?
“Estimates say 128 meters minimum”
“MINIMUM?
“Yes anyways wanna feel it?
“Sure?
“Ok then FIRE!
3 torpedo's wizz past the water at dangerously high speeds and collide the ice
BOOM a hole opens up
We surface, then I go to the massive shark its striped
It frozen solid “Yep been here for millions of years
I feel its skin it feels like rubber but that's when its eye looked at me
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