Sunday, April 19, 2020

100wc #30 Samara

There had always been this dog that lived in our backyard, it was so mysterious and unknown I always thought it was a sign of hope that the world still had beauty.
When I get angry I always kick our couch, now it has a hole in it.
My parents didn’t approve of that, my mum always said ‘The sun specks the truth in which we can’t understand.’ I had a bunny she was called Flower but she was killed by a hawk, Just remember when life brings you down you’ll get up and try again.
You're not alone anymore.
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  1. AnonymousApril 20, 2020 at 3:14 PM

    Hello Samara!
    This is such a awesome, inspirational story. I like the way you used the word, sign and hole.Its also mysterious story. Like its a mystery that there's a dog in your backyard.
    Milah.

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