Tuesday, April 14, 2020

week 29 100WC Addison


CRASH. “Wait what was that” I ask in confusion.
“Hang on, is that in our house?” I asked again. 
“I think it is” mum said 
“Come on, let's go check it out” I say excitedly.
“Wow is that car on our roof” mum says .
You could easily tell that we were both confused.
Then the fire department came and they acted quickly with alarms and yelling so much was happening around us then KABOOM. The car exploded on our roof but the good thing is the guy that was inside got out safely so we got house insurance and spent A LOT. 


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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 4:46 PM

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  2. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 4:48 PM

    Hello,
    That ending was really funny. You spent alot.
    Happy that the guy got out safely.
    Luckily the fire department got there fast before the explpsion happened.
    Continue Writing. - Kenneth

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  3. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 3:51 PM

    how did the latter get ther
    ?????????????:-O:-O:-O

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