Tuesday, April 21, 2020
100WC - Week #30 - Taisha
Brrrrrrrrrrrrrr it's cold today I say to myself as i'm walking to school . I'm going to get a flower for Mrs Beck today, “OUCH !! there is a bee in that one” . I got to school, “don't forget to sign in everyone” Mrs Beck said, all of a sudden a large crowd surrounded something, I pushed through to see what it was a hole? “The sun has crashed!!!”, people were saying. “Aaaaah!!!” my eyes flashed before me. Is it a dream? Hello anyone here ? I think I fell down . I kick the ground to see if this is really happening, then...
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I was in Sydney on my yearly visit. When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment. When something pulled me bac...
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One day there was a spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits. I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there... -
Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted crimson misty frantically grave ...
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