¨So what do you think?¨ I ask my teacher curious as to what he may be thinking.
¨Do you want my honest answer or my nice answer?¨ he questions me.
¨Honest¨ I say wondering how that may affect the answer.
¨It's rubbish¨ he announces.
¨What! well It doesn’t matter what you think, does it?’ I start to question myself.
¨Well it kind of does matter what I think, this narrative is worth half of your grade.¨
he's right Mum
would freak if she found out. Should I run and fail my grade or stay and pass my grade?
You Choose!
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