(poem)
The sun set and the birds got comfy as night has awoken.
The crickets start to chirp at each other.
The mother reads a story to her little ones as they slowly drift away.
The lighthouse light turns on to guide the boats home.
The lights go off in the calm neighborhood as dogs get in there kennels
The flowers close their petals.
The animals of the night come crawling out when all other animals go to bed.
The eyes close as we drift away to soft music.
The wind stops flowing for day is falling
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