Tuesday, April 14, 2020

100WC - Week #29 - Kenneth


“Kenneth to Commander, Do you read me?” I asked on the radio.
“I hear you loud and clear.” answered the Commander.
“Godzilla has been spotted in the city.” Said Kenneth.
“The people have evacuated but we need a rescue squad out and patrolling.” said the Commander.
“I see a man stuck in a car on top of a house. The titans must’ve flung him on the roof.” Said Kenneth. Godzilla was fighting against the hydra, Godzilla then let out a massive roar and rushed towards the hydra. Godzilla let out a massive lazer and it destroyed half of the city.


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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousApril 14, 2020 at 3:24 PM

    Hi Kenneth.
    This is a really cool and creative story. I liked how you talked through the radio. You used some sense of humour too.
    Great job,
    Milah

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