Tuesday, April 28, 2020

100WC - Week #31 - Emily




Today I'm going camping with my family into the forest where the moon shines the most.                    ''Where are going to put the tent?''                       
"Over there by the tree where the mist''                 
''OK''  See we have not gone out of the house because of the  corona virus. It feels great to get out of the house for a little bit of time.                                   
"Mum, Dad, Charlee the moon  is rise up''           
''Wow, look at the mist it's pink and purple"       
"Everyone it time for bed"                                     
"OK"  Tomorrow we get to go to the lake and go for a walk in the forest. This year has been great but not the corona virus.



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  1. AnonymousMay 7, 2020 at 7:18 AM

    Hi Emily, I really liked you story. And I agree the corona virus has not been great! I hope you have a good day and come read my blog at https://kidblog.org/class/6th-grade-20203/posts/02eqr6sopt5iymy8qzwhh564o
    -Norah

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