The stars were out, and the moon shone bright. But something was missing, was it the fact that I was alone or the fact that I was never happy, yet I stared into the stars as if I still belonged.
It was hard being the only one on this plant. I had a beautiful place to live. But was it enough?
‘T-weet, Tweet’ A bird or could it be that someone waiting for me. I look into the distance- fair is my eyes can see, but yet they fail me. As if it was bad enough I still can’t that someone.
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